Dude

The tile of this was amazing!

Nice :D but...

I think this is an amazing song, the only thing, is that a note seem to be misplaced in the second piano loop

you can hear the first one at about 0:14, right after the "Base piano note thingy" :P
if you know what i mean. It repeats trough the piano part of the song, but I think you should fix that one note, place it half a note up or down or something like that.

If you do I think it will sound better in my ears
but it's a nice song you have here. Work on it and it will be perfect :D

Cheers
Von Avon

BOM BOM BOM BOM silent silent silent BOM BOM BOM..

I think this is an awsome song. You got a nice melody here and it rocks!

I think you should improve the silent parts. The oceanic part. And maybe fade some of the waves and wind sounds. They where a bit too loud.

Besides that, I think you sould put in a total stop, a second with completely silence and BOM start again :D

Cheers
Von Avon