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Nice :D but...

I think this is an amazing song, the only thing, is that a note seem to be misplaced in the second piano loop

you can hear the first one at about 0:14, right after the "Base piano note thingy" :P
if you know what i mean. It repeats trough the piano part of the song, but I think you should fix that one note, place it half a note up or down or something like that.

If you do I think it will sound better in my ears
but it's a nice song you have here. Work on it and it will be perfect :D

Cheers
Von Avon

Yodamanjaro responds:

I"m sorry, but I've moved on from this. I mean, it sounds cool, but I guess it was just some sort of "stage" that I've went through in my producing experience. Now I'm back to producing trance tracks.

Thanks for the review though!
Derrick

BOM BOM BOM BOM silent silent silent BOM BOM BOM..

I think this is an awsome song. You got a nice melody here and it rocks!

I think you should improve the silent parts. The oceanic part. And maybe fade some of the waves and wind sounds. They where a bit too loud.

Besides that, I think you sould put in a total stop, a second with completely silence and BOM start again :D

Cheers
Von Avon

Equation responds:

LOL Thanks :)

It's a really old song of mine this one is, I made it around 4 years ago, If I still had the project saved I would of mae a better version of it... But unfortunatly the projects died with the computer :(

Thanks again 4 the review though

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